SCENE 4
Rosie is asleep when all of a sudden her sister Molly comes bursting throw the door.
Molly- Rosie Rosie look how pretty I look. ( she runs to the middle of the room and dose 2 twirls Showing of her new Bright yellow dress.She then jumps on Rosie’s bed tugging at the sheets.)
Rosie- uhh what do you want Molly? ( Rosie tries pushing Molly of the bed in a playful way until Molly gets up and heads to the door but then stops and heads towards Rosie’s desk.
Molly- (picks up Rosie’s spray and puts some on and giggles) It’s Nanna’s birthday today and don’t I look pretty
( admiring herself in the mirror. She turns round to Rosie)
Aren’t you getting up? Ooo Please let me pick out your outfit please!
Rosie- ( sits up in bed and smiles at her little sister.Before she can say anything there’s a call from downstairs from mum.
Mum- Molly Molly-moo come down stairs and let me do your hair were leaving soon.
Molly- (shouts down the stairs) Oooo okay mummy I’m coming. (Molly runs out the door and down the stairs so fast Rosie could here her loud foot steps and rases down the stairs she nearly falls down.
Rosie- ( laughs to herself and smiles. Molly’s little out burst has brighten her day and makes her feel happy. She gets out of bed puts on her playlist and looks in the mirror. She brushes her hair she decides to have it down. She tooks her hair behind her ears and smiles. She whispers to herself today the day.
Category: Planning and Production
Scene 3
SCENE 3
The next day Rosie doesn’t get up until 12. She is feeling down and just wants to lay in bed all day.
Rosie sits up and looks at her clock by her bed. It reads 12:05. She can here someone walking up the stairs. She puts her hair into a messy ponytail and smooths out her dovey.
Mum- (Knocks on the door,pauses)Rosie can I come in?
Rosie- Yeah sure mum.
Mum- (Opens the door and gives Rosie a big smile) Here you go love brought you up a chocolate and some biscuits.( she puts it down on the coaster next to Rosie’s bed side table and sits down on her bed beside her).
Rosie(pauses) you know you can tell me anything dont you?
Rosie- Yeah I know mum(without looking up or making eye contact)
Mum- It’s just that me and your dad are worried about you. You seem very quite and don’t talk to us much anymore.
(She reaches for Rosie’s hand.)
Is there something bothering you at school? Or something you want to tell me or get of your chest?
Rosie- ( still looking down and shakes her head) No mum I’m fine just a bit tired that’s all and got a lot on with GCSE’s that’s all.
(Rosie looks up at her mum and gives her a smile.)
Mum- Hmm okay then if your sure. (begins to get up)
I love you sweetie don’t forget that will you?
Rosie- No mum I wont ( she gives her mum one last smile)
Mum- ( reaches over for a hug) Don’t forget its your nanna’s birthday meal tomorrow. (she walks out the door and closes it shut.)
Rosie- ( she is left on her own looking out to space. She reaches for her hot chocolate and drinks it slowly. She takes a pause and buts the drink down. She gets back into bed and brings the sheet over her until you can just see her face. Rosie begins to cry.
Scene 2
(SCENE 2)
The next morning Rosie is up early sitting in her bed with messy hair and bags under her eyes not having slept well the night before. She grabs her phone that is on her bedside stand and opens up instergram. She spends 20 minutes scrolling through her friends post. She sees how happy her friends seen. Finally she huffs and throws her phone on her bed. She gets out of bed and looks in the mirror and brushes her hair and whips face with a wipe. She grabs her phone again opens spotify and puts her favorite song on Here comes the sun by the Beatles.
Rosie reaches to the back of her chair and puts on her black skinny jeans,white baggy top and a mustered colored jumper. She goes to her draw and finds a pair of ankle socks with little rainbows on the side. Rosie walks to the other side of the room and puts her black vans on which are under her desk. Finally grabs her rucksack and heads downstairs. She stops down the hall to look in the mirror. Fixes her hair and heads down for breakfast.
This is the second bit of my script so far.
FMP Ideas
The themes we have been given for our FMP are…
- The Circle
- The Distance
- The Choice
I’m interested in screen writing and sound but think for my FMP i will focus more the the writing and help out with sound and recording sound.
Some ideas I have come up with…
The Circle
Having someone relive a tragic event that has happend in their life and having to relive it every day.
Or getting up everyday and trying to get out the same old circle/ruteen but struggles to do so.
The Distance
Therese a girl who has experienced some bad experiences in her life and its all about her trying to over come her past and see how far she has come and her improving her life. The girl could be very shy and sensitive and shy and when she goes on her date and meets this boy she convinces her self that she is in love. But it turns out that he is a drunk and a bit abusive. It ends by her getting out of the relationship and moving on with her life.
The Choice
Boy has to chose whether or not to stay with his mum or dad after there devours.
Young boy has goten himself in a situation where he has to make a quick decision whether or not to fight or flight and could show both sides of what happend if i picked one or the other.
Here are some ideas we came up with in class.



Here is a rough plan of the theme distance that I have come up with.
