Yesterday I edited the script and went throw it with my tutor. We talked about the flashbacks and how not to give too much away at the start of the film. We also talked about how during the fight seen Sophie needs to realise that she doesn’t want to be with Rob anymore and wants move on and away from him.

In the latexes versen of the script I took the bit from the start were Sophies in Rob’s room taking off the necklace and moved it towards the end were it’s the day of her first driving lesson. By doing this its like totally removing herself from him and properly moving on with her life and having no memories of him and her time with him.

I also added in the fight seen that when Sophie is cleaning up the broken glass she realises she doesn’t want to be here and saying she hates rob and living in his flat. This is the most important bit in the film were we was an audience can see her grow and stand up for herself and family moving on and realise she doesn’t need to relay on him anymore.

This feedback has been really helpful and I think has defiantly improved the script.