The top download is off the script the person in my group did since we are both doing the script together. I read through the script and printed it out. I then started to make notes on it and started adding some dialog and some things the characters could do to add the contrast in the characters.
I then opend the same script and started to add my notes to the script and edited the same document. After I had finished I read it once more to make sure I hadn’t forgotten any of my notes. After that I sent the document back to my friend who is help writing the script so she can add to it. This is how we are making/ building up the script. Once she has edited it I will do the same.
Here are some of the notes I made on the script and added to the script.
Poppy’s FMP 