
At the start of the film I want it to open on the girl in a black background and have the girl sitting on a chair saying her monolouge. By doing this it sets the scene and tells the audience that its going to be dramatic and serious. The monologue has to set the mood.
First thought of the monologue…
Opens up and you see Sophie sitting on the chair on a slight angle. Looking at the floor of a few seconds and sighs then looks at the camera and begins…
It’s funny isn’t it (pause)
The odd stuff you remember, (pause) a moment ,(pause) a feeling.
Like the moment I realised I had never driven a car before or even sat in the drivers seat. Or that I have never been on my own long enough to do simple everyday ordinary tasks.
Since I was 16 and he was 17 it has always been me and Rob. (takes a deep breath and rubs her hands on her knees and looks at the camera again.)
The first year I was happy… However my friends and sister said that it was toxic. But all relationships have there rough stages… Right?
Very good, Poppy, showing sustained research into monologues and the beginnings of your own. It would be good to find more examples from professional films to support your work — these all look like audition tapes, and they have value, but could definitely be more focused on film. Good so far!
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